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[Aaqib Ahmed]

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If you would like me to write a poem on a specific topic,let me know?

[Princess Mujahada]

I think it would be cool if you could write a poem on "Money". How we are obsessed with it to the point that it can destroy us. There is one hadith (that I can't find right now) that says "The biggest (I believe the word is "trial") of my ummah, will be money."

Edited by Mujahada ÈäÊ ãÈÑæß, 13 July 2007 - 10:33 PM.

[Aaqib Ahmed]

Money. . . . . . . .

Obsession these days is money,money,money,
seems to be attractive,as sweet as honey,
it's an illusion open your eyes,otherwise it will decieve,
as far as your hungry eyes can percieve,
U want it like a stupid donkey running for food,
wake up yeah,read the Quran,it does wonders,even for your mood,
Money is not wealth,knowledge is wealth,
seek knowledge don't abuse your health,
an obsession,money is,an obsession,
it will narrow your heart,form a compression,
unlock the noor from your heart,as bright as the sun,shines light,
subhanallah,such strength,such power so beautiful,so bright,
thats what your deen does,wonders for your heart,your deen,
read Quran,be successful in the Hereafter the Unseen .. . . . . . . . .

Author-Aaqib

What you think sis?

for the topic,a good one.

Edited by Aaqib Ahmed, 13 July 2007 - 11:01 PM.

[passerby]

wow that was quick MashaAllah!
(thinks of a topic)

[Aaqib Ahmed]

Hehe yeah.

[Princess Mujahada]

True talent!! Being able to write a GOOD poem in a couple days is amazing, being able to write it in less than a couple hours is awesome

Masha'Allah this is a great piece! It truly is amazing! Insha'Allah I'm going to post it around!!

[Aaqib Ahmed]

sis for your feedback.

Any other topics?

[Haqqul_Yaqeen]

Hi brother Aaqib! Can you write one on self-confidence?

[Aaqib Ahmed]

Self Confidence. . . . .

Self confidence is like a jigsaw puzzle,
a small missing piece can be hard to find,
a substitute is needed,even if you have to unlock the inner depths of your mind,
its all in your head,its all about positive thoughts,don't be deaf,dumb or blind,

Self confidence is like buliding blocks,
where little water droplets coherently bulid up and up and make an ocean,
even that takes time,
read Quran,keep trust in Allah,He is the Sublime,


Self confidence is a pivotal aspect of life,
don't be silly and cut your mood with a knife,
express yourself,smile it lifts the mood,
remember your blessed,some people are dying,even for food,

Self confidence is like a skill,
even depression can kill,
think,watch yourself,you will pay the account to Allah,even the bill. . . .. . . . . .. .

Author-Aaqib

Edited by Aaqib Ahmed, 14 July 2007 - 04:07 PM.

[Aaqib Ahmed]

Any other poem requests?

[strider]

EDIT.

Edited by strider, 14 July 2007 - 08:41 PM.

[~mehnaz~]

sadness

regret

anger

hate

etc

lol I know they're all negative, but I want to push you a little..

we've seen some very postitive poems from you but lets see you delve deeper and perhaps touch on what lies beneath our happy facades..

[Aaqib Ahmed]

Sadness. . . . .. .


From deep above U see a broken smile,
trying to grab thin sprinkles of air,keeps missing,drop and hurt myself,
bitter scars of severe depression surround my life,my dream,
every particle within me cries,blasted out tears of red blood,as sharp as a knife,
cut through metal,rip through the earth,so deep,enough to make ships float on,
sad isn't it,such bitterness,me,myself and I,
feelings of success vanish within a second,all my dreams and desires one step too far,
some things are beyond my comprehension,especially when I try to grab the fragment of happiness
from deep within the depths of my imagination,
sad,sad always and forever,me,myself and I. . . . . . . . .

Anger. . . . . . .

Such blindness,such deafness,such stupidness shown by the Ummah,
caught up with this life,soo sweet as honey,u think,even forget to go Juma,
who are U,you selfish,ungrateful person,you need to be slapped ten times and thrown in the ocean,
break a bone,go cry,love to see U in motion,
only then U may be grateful for your blessings,you arrogant silly person,you cry and moan when u get a scratch,
think about it,theres people dying and yet u want the limos and clothes of the rich,that match
wake up and remove attachment from this cursed,sick Dunya,it will eat U up,
why go down the road to failure,why stop muslims seeking their deen U hypocrite,
how dare U,ask yourself who are U,what are U,
if only but U knew,what was to come,it will HIT u like a bang,
watch yourself. . . . . .

[umAhmad]

Assalamu Alaikum, That's it Aaqib, this is your new Career, now start charging and you'll become a millionaire soon, then you cahn help out the Muslim Ummah with the help of your hobby, that's writing poems.

Now anyone requesting poems, I am Aaqib's agent, go through me, the boy's too nice, I am the one who knows how to deal, hehehehehe.

Take care Ya Bunayye, nice ones, MashaAllah.

Salaams and duaas, aunty umAhmad.

[~mehnaz~]

lol that was quick.

well done

[Aaqib Ahmed]

A Pick n Mix Of Regret/Hate/. . . . .

Drowned within horrendous gloominess of perception,
struggling to possess the crown jewel of deception,

If only,why only,is all that flows,
even in the shiny light I see a blow,
deep feelings of remorse creep in like a spider,
holding on to thin ice,wishing to be an admiring glider,

bulit dreams,hopes upon weak idols,broken,missing stepping stones,
loose petals of my rose and broken bones,
my self created world,full of unreal ambitions,goals,dreams,
visions of happiness all an illusion,
reaching the end, bad conclusion,

a fantasy,a false hallucination,
never near,
all but fear,
all but a distance,all but a distance,always and forever,
hoping it'd be never never,
hoping,

heart captured by prisoners,within the horrifying, murkiness inertial frames of darkness,
crying,sniveling to break free from this trepidation,
particles and fragments of immense horror stick to the loneliness of my heart,
if only,why only.....

Waiting,waiting,waiting with such restiveness,such frustration,
dreaming of the bitter wind of reality to stop comsuming my every flesh and blood,
and dropping it into a pile of thick mud,full of blood,as deep as an ocean as deep as a flood,

the wind thrusts towards the inner profundity of my soul,my heart,repels it like a magnet,going oh yet far,
and never coming back...........

Author-Aaqib

[Aaqib Ahmed]

Assalamu Alaikum, That's it Aaqib, this is your new Career, now start charging and you'll become a millionaire soon, then you cahn help out the Muslim Ummah with the help of your hobby, that's writing poems.

Now anyone requesting poems, I am Aaqib's agent, go through me, the boy's too nice, I am the one who knows how to deal, hehehehehe.

Hehe, aunty.

Yeah plan to help the Ummah with my poems.

Charging,hmm,how much?

YaY I have an Agent.

I can deal,trust.

hehe.

May Allah bless u,ameen.

Mehnaz sis.

What U think of them?

[~mehnaz~]

i likes..i likesss

OoOoO I'm inspired..makes me wanna go touch up my poems...

[Aaqib Ahmed]

Being able to write a GOOD poem in a couple days is amazing, being able to write it in less than a couple hours is awesome

What about a couple of minutes?
hehe

Subhanallah.

Mehnaz sis for feedback.

Any other poem ideas?

Edited by Aaqib Ahmed, 14 July 2007 - 10:16 PM.

[~mehnaz~]

Any other poem ideas?

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