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Please let me know what you think of this poem:

 

 

I’m just a baby who wants to play

What do I care of what the world say’s

Come my friends lets go and play

Black white and brown we are all the same

The soldiers have come to liberate us

My father says that they should leave us

So now my fathers a terrorist that’s not nice

And the soldiers are liberators that’s so nice

Why do we fight it doesn’t make sense

Why cant we play that makes sense

Now my father has died and I just cried

My mother is sad things are so bad

I’m no more a baby I don’t want to play

Now I listen to what the world say

As I grow older its plain to see

All is not what seems to be

The soldiers have come to conquer land

Please my friend don’t give them your hand

They never did care about me and you

It’s all about greed let me tell you

Now I’m a man let me see

What I can do to make us free

Oh you conquerors let us talk

Leave our land and take a walk

Who wants to fight it’s just not right

But if you don’t leave then I will fight

 

 

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Assalamu Alaikum

 

Fayz - that was really beautiful... really nice indeed... did you wrte it? Allah has blessed you with a beautiful talent!

 

JazzakhAllah for sharing...

 

Walaikum Assalaam

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Assalamu Alaikum

 

Jazakallah for the comments Yes I did write it I did not know what people would think of it I am glad for all the replies.

 

:P :D :D

 

Walaikum Assalam

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:D :D :P :P :D very good talent you have bro.

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:D

 

MashAllah very nice!

Simple but effective.

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