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Extreme Horrors Of Darkness..........

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Extreme Horrors of Darkness..........

 

Drowned within horrendous gloominess of perception,

struggling to possess the crown jewel of deception,

 

If only,why only,is all that flows,

even in the shiny light I see a blow,

deep feelings of remorse creep in like a spider,

holding on to thin ice,wishing to be an admiring glider,

 

bulit dreams,hopes upon weak idols,broken,missing stepping stones,

loose petals of my rose and broken bones,

my self created world,full of unreal ambitions,goals,dreams,

visions of happiness all an illusion,

reaching the end, bad conclusion,

 

a fantasy,a false hallucination,

never near,

all but fear,

all but a distance,all but a distance,always and forever,

hoping it'd be never never,

hoping,

 

heart captured by prisoners,within the horrifying, murkiness inertial frames of darkness,

crying,sniveling to break free from this trepidation,

particles and fragments of immense horror stick to the loneliness of my heart,

if only,why only.....

 

Waiting,waiting,waiting with such restiveness,such frustration,

dreaming of the bitter wind of reality to stop comsuming my every flesh and blood,

and dropping it into a pile of thick mud,full of blood,as deep as an ocean as deep as a flood,

 

the wind thrusts towards the inner profundity of my soul,my heart,repels it like a magnet,going oh yet far,

and never coming back...........

 

Author-Aaqib

 

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Assalam ALaikum

 

Mashahallah.. nice poem & a reminder too :sl:

 

May Allah (SWT) guide us all.. ameen

 

May Allah (SWT) reward all of us Jannah.. ameen

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MashAllah bro :sl:

 

I want to write a poem but, I never do :/ lol

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good one bro mashallah

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Asalamaleikum!

 

You are a telented youngster! :sl:

Poetry is not something all can do. Truly it is something that you can continue to do! :sl:

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A poem with really profound meaning...

 

You're really an asset to the forum bro Aaqib...keep it up brother :) :sl:

 

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:j: for your feedback.:)

 

 

Glad you like my poem. :)

 

May Allah reward u for reading it.Ameen.

 

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:sl: warahamtullah,

 

Mashallaah, you have an amazing talent in poetry.

 

Why not post your poems in a place like fictionpress, you get loads of feedback and it allows you to grow as a poet as well. I found the site helped me.

 

Anyhow Mashallaah.

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